dark angel52

That is terrible that it happened to you. It has to take a lot of guts to post it up here and say it to people. I do hope things ...

Wow, that is a ton of emotion there, this is one of the first times I have felt teary at a piece. And I feel bad if that is/was your ...

Thanks, that helped a ton! And I hate to say if I am good or not, makes me feel weird. Hard to explain but still.. Anyway I did use some ...

The only reason I put that there is because the ones who are creating the madness are men. They have no names, and not any of them are females. I ...

Depending on if people want it or not, is how I know if I should post more of it or not. I really want people to tell me how they ...

This is a really interesting piece. It wasn't what I thought it was going to be, and I like that. It was a bit confuisng where it was the girl, ...

Good Start. Besides the few grammar mistakes that are already pointed out, I can see no others. So good job on the grammar. It can be a bit confusing, especially ...

That was a good poem, it was simple but right to the point. Other than the few grammatic errors that were pointed out by the others, I saw nothing wrong ...

I just wrote this really quick, and I am hoping someone will tell me if its worth going back and editing. And maybe get some sugestions about titles? Alright thanx ...

I think that this has really good structure. I thought it was well written, and the candle burning part was I think my biggest attack on it. That is only ...

That was a really good poem, I could feel the emotions that you put into it. I can tell you put a lot into it. With everything in there you ...

It has the potential to be really awesome -- And no I am not saying its bad, because its really good. :) I am just saying add some description, like ...

I'm Jess, or dark angel whatever you want to call me. I joined to try and get reviews on my works. I will probably post a lot of stuff that ...